Hi Emilia!

First up, I think the title could be improved. "Write Like No One is Watching" is a bit short and doesn't really grab my attention. Using the headline analyzer at https://headlines.coschedule.com/headlines, it has a score of 62.

Here are two possible alternatives for your title:

What Happens When You Write Like No One is Watching?

Headline score: 77

Should We Write Like No One is Watching?

Headline score: 70

The article itself is well-written. I'm not entirely sure I agree with the point you make in the article, but I will post a separate comment there about that.